We are learning about pick a path story we had to make our own story and it had to include about the matariki star
what we had to work on was to make it more interesting. my buddies that helped me were rico and pranav pls check out there blogs.
rico Pranav
This is a very creative story with interesting ideas David. I like that you boys think out of the box and stretch the imagination of the reader. Maybe next time you could try linking your pages more clearly to help the story flow from page to page. Good work.
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