Great work with your pepeha David. The only suggestion I can make is that you have your sister come before you :) I hope this year you find the courage to say it in taumata, I know it can be very daunting but I think you can do it :)
Kia ora David my name is Isaiah and I go to Paihia School. I really think your pepeha is good but I think you should add your voice over because some people might not know how to read some of the words. Keep up the great work.
Hi David I really like your blogpost about your pepeha. It was fantastic I really like the way that you made your slideshow 4 slides instead of a whole bunch of slides so it is not as messed up. But you could of added capitals letter for the names of the things in your pepeha and you could also change your spelling up a bit as well other than that it is awesome.
Great work with your pepeha David. The only suggestion I can make is that you have your sister come before you :)
ReplyDeleteI hope this year you find the courage to say it in taumata, I know it can be very daunting but I think you can do it :)
Kia ora David my name is Isaiah and I go to Paihia School. I really think your pepeha is good but I think you should add your voice over because some people might not know how to read some of the words.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi David I really like your blogpost about your pepeha. It was fantastic I really like the way that you made your slideshow 4 slides instead of a whole bunch of slides so it is not as messed up. But you could of added capitals letter for the names of the things in your pepeha and you could also change your spelling up a bit as well other than that it is awesome.